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Olympus omd em 10III . 60mm macro+ 10+16mm mmlite external ring tub , macro ring light flash

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The subject itself is good and it shows a really interesting moment, but the toning is a little bit too green. Is there something wrong with the color temperature or do you use a lamp with a low CRI? I also think you've too much noise for the low DOF. There aren't many details and the details which you can see looks noisy.
 

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The subject itself is good and it shows a really interesting moment, but the toning is a little bit too green. Is there something wrong with the color temperature or do you use a lamp with a low CRI? I also think you've too much noise for the low DOF. There aren't many details and the details which you can see looks noisy.

I use the simply ring macro flash Led lamp, is useful a bit hard to use to get good effects, but I think to create any good diffuser for It but it's too hard when it's on the lens.. but I can get quite nicely sharp subjects with external ring tubs ..
Maybe you are right, the temperature improving can be good 🤔. The picture was a bit hard to editing and I I cropped a lot.., I can share the picture in original one day if you want to try to edit it or in Photo Clinic subforum.. hmm maybe someone will have an idea how to improve the picture, any magic 😄
I think the forest maybe not best place to shoot extreme macros when there is lot of shadows but lot of objects to shooting too 😃

Danke Helix_2648 Helix_2648 for your good comment 🙂. Do you have any funny pictures with insects? 😁
 
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Very impressive image nataliaflejszar&Photo nataliaflejszar&Photo , glad that you started to share some macro pictures. However, you could decrease a bit shadow on Lr and blacks too, to get the background a bit more black :)

Thanks Jack Jack 😉🕷, the spider looks really angry on the picture 😃🕷, but it was kind, small spider, interested about camera 😉🕸🕷🦟 Very interesting animals...🤩
Yeah I've been shooting a lot of pictures in last times, the forum is only best place to get good critique,opinions and suggestions how to improve skills, very useful and helpful when I'm learning new skills..🤩🕸🕷🦟. .and the forum is nicely active in last time 🤩👌
Thanks for good suggestions, I can try to do all background black in the picture 😉🕷
 
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I use the simply ring macro flash Led lamp, is useful a bit hard to use to get good effects, but I think to create any good diffuser for It but it's too hard when it's on the lens.. but I can get quite nicely sharp subjects with external ring tubs ..
Maybe you are right, the temperature improving can be good 🤔. The picture was a bit hard to editing and I I cropped a lot.., I can share the picture in original one day if you want to try to edit it or in Photo Clinic subforum.. hmm maybe someone will have an idea how to improve the picture, any magic 😄
I think the forest maybe not best place to shoot extreme macros when there is lot of shadows but lot of objects to shooting too 😃

Danke Helix_2648 Helix_2648 for your good comment 🙂. Do you have any funny pictures with insects? 😁
Yes... but I hope you're not shy.

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