Want critique Bee

[Deleted member 310]

Raynox + tamron

I just made a diffuser for the flash, I need criticism and constructive advice, to continue my investigations.

 

[Deleted member 250]

Hi @Christophe Berche.
Exposure looks ok to me with maybe slightly dark shadows. Detail and sharpness very good where in focus.
The composition works for me as does the background.
How close were you?

 

[Deleted member 250]

I guess you will have a steep learning curve with the Raynox @Christophe Berche but I suspect well worth the effort.

 

[Deleted member 310]

@Bill Edwards I was at 10 cm maximum, I'm just starting to get used to the 90 mm Tamron, but now I'm losing all my bearings with the raynox.

 

[Helix_2648]

Really good! Even if I consider the Raynox lens with it's low DOF. Sharpness, focus and colors looks good. Only the reflections from the flash on the eyes of the bee are a bit annoying. But really only a bit!

 

[Deleted member 310]

[QUOTE = "Helix_2648, message: 13514, membre: 128"]
Très bien! Même si je considère l'objectif Raynox avec sa faible DOF. La netteté, la mise au point et les couleurs semblent bonnes. Seuls les reflets du flash sur les yeux de l'abeille sont un peu gênants. Mais vraiment seulement un peu!
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Thanks Helix_2648 , I'm gonna change the diffuser