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[Bart the belgian]

Ok, I searched for more contrast in this picture. Normally the focus is more on "the right place". What can i do to make the next pictures better?

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[Helix_2648]

Hi Bart the belgian. Why do you think that the focus is not good? You've set the focus perfectly on the pollen stamps.
Maybe I would change the framing. You cut the right flower petals a bit.

I would try to show the whole flower which might look good with the black background. Try to improve the details of the petals (or the shadows on the petals) a bit to get a better plasticity.

If you want to show the whole flower you can also try to darken the end of the petals a bit to guide the viewer's eyes to the center of the flower.

 

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

Hi Bart the belgian !, you got already some of critique and suggestions from Helix_2648 ,
Itsel, I like the picture, and it got me the ''wow'' reaction when I seen it!, very good and creative picture, my friend! Maybe some of improvings would take it better.. so as you want to, depends of you

 

[Jack]

My recommendation Bart the belgian , try to get whole flower in focus, otherwise looks for me here that has been cutted. Unless you had other composition, that's probably same as Helix_2648 said.