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nataliaflejszar&Photo

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Flowers are already here around! View attachment 15497. It's my favourite subject to shooting so don't be surprised if I'll share a lot of flower pictures, especially turned into my art style as this one! Art is sometimes hard to understand View attachment 15498.
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The picture I took 2 days ago, in the small park close my home, when the rain stopped for a while. It was late evening, about 10pm , gloomy because of clouds but we haven't dark nights here any more! View attachment 15499. The light is from my phone... I wanted to create this special climate on the picture!
I love this kind of pictures View attachment 15500 hope you tooView attachment 15501.

Let's give me gues some critique and opinions about this picture as i need that!!!

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Jack

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Hi nataliaflejszar&Photo nataliaflejszar&Photo , while there is good composition, the photo is really blur, a lot of noise presented which I believe is due of lack of lighting. You probably also could get a bit closer to the subject to ensure that there are mode details, as when I zoom in, I can see blur spots as well.

Apart from that, seems to be ok photo ;)
 

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I like this kind of dark mood photo. I can feel the flower is feeling tired after bloom the whole day and she just needs to rest. I also feel she is hopeless in this photo.
 

nataliaflejszar&Photo

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Hi nataliaflejszar&Photo nataliaflejszar&Photo , while there is good composition, the photo is really blur, a lot of noise presented which I believe is due of lack of lighting. You probably also could get a bit closer to the subject to ensure that there are mode details, as when I zoom in, I can see blur spots as well.

Apart from that, seems to be ok photo ;)
thank you Jack, there's not noice, as ISO is just 200, I guess is the picture compressing effect :D, it was a bit a challange get a right focus in the gloomy and wet summer night :D
 
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Hi nataliaflejszar&Photo nataliaflejszar&Photo. I really like the style in general but there are some points which could be improved. First of all it'S a bit too busy. The second point is the plant right beside the flower which pulls my attention away from the blossom. And I would increase the exposure at least a bit... I mean I know that it's a question of personal taste and that you want to show a dark mood picture, but the blossom could be at least a bit brighter.
 

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Hi nataliaflejszar&Photo nataliaflejszar&Photo , while there is good composition, the photo is really blur, a lot of noise presented which I believe is due of lack of lighting. You probably also could get a bit closer to the subject to ensure that there are mode details, as when I zoom in, I can see blur spots as well.

Apart from that, seems to be ok photo ;)
thank you Jack, there's not noice, as ISO is just 200, I guess is the picture compressing effect :D, it was a bit a challange get a right focus in the gloomy and wet summer night :D
Probably I have that feeling of noise because on to much contrast ? Especially on dark sides.
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Yohanna_D

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the light falling on the flower against the darker background is really nice!! well done!!!
the only thing I would change - maybe less elements near the flower so that the eye can only contemplate this soft and delicate flower! ;)
 

nataliaflejszar&Photo

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Hi nataliaflejszar&Photo nataliaflejszar&Photo , while there is good composition, the photo is really blur, a lot of noise presented which I believe is due of lack of lighting. You probably also could get a bit closer to the subject to ensure that there are mode details, as when I zoom in, I can see blur spots as well.

Apart from that, seems to be ok photo ;)
thank you Jack, there's not noice, as ISO is just 200, I guess is the picture compressing effect :D, it was a bit a challange get a right focus in the gloomy and wet summer night :D
Some noise is not a problem and can come depending of many things šŸ˜