Want critique Flowers are already here around! And I need your critique and opinions about this picture !!

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

Flowers are already here around! View attachment 15497. It's my favourite subject to shooting so don't be surprised if I'll share a lot of flower pictures, especially turned into my art style as this one! Art is sometimes hard to understand View attachment 15498.
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The picture I took 2 days ago, in the small park close my home, when the rain stopped for a while. It was late evening, about 10pm , gloomy because of clouds but we haven't dark nights here any more! View attachment 15499. The light is from my phone... I wanted to create this special climate on the picture!
I love this kind of pictures View attachment 15500 hope you tooView attachment 15501.

Let's give me gues some critique and opinions about this picture as i need that!!!

 

[Jack]

Hi nataliaflejszar&Photo , while there is good composition, the photo is really blur, a lot of noise presented which I believe is due of lack of lighting. You probably also could get a bit closer to the subject to ensure that there are mode details, as when I zoom in, I can see blur spots as well.

Apart from that, seems to be ok photo

 

[lovitazoe]

I like this kind of dark mood photo. I can feel the flower is feeling tired after bloom the whole day and she just needs to rest. I also feel she is hopeless in this photo.

 

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

Hi nataliaflejszar&Photo , while there is good composition, the photo is really blur, a lot of noise presented which I believe is due of lack of lighting. You probably also could get a bit closer to the subject to ensure that there are mode details, as when I zoom in, I can see blur spots as well.

Apart from that, seems to be ok photo

thank you Jack, there's not noice, as ISO is just 200, I guess is the picture compressing effect , it was a bit a challange get a right focus in the gloomy and wet summer night

 

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

I like this kind of dark mood photo. I can feel the flower is feeling tired after bloom the whole day and she just needs to rest. I also feel she is hopeless in this photo.

thank you lovitazoe for your comment , great to hear that you can feel the climate!

 

[Helix_2648]

Hi nataliaflejszar&Photo. I really like the style in general but there are some points which could be improved. First of all it'S a bit too busy. The second point is the plant right beside the flower which pulls my attention away from the blossom. And I would increase the exposure at least a bit... I mean I know that it's a question of personal taste and that you want to show a dark mood picture, but the blossom could be at least a bit brighter.

 

[Jack]

Hi nataliaflejszar&Photo , while there is good composition, the photo is really blur, a lot of noise presented which I believe is due of lack of lighting. You probably also could get a bit closer to the subject to ensure that there are mode details, as when I zoom in, I can see blur spots as well.

Apart from that, seems to be ok photo

thank you Jack, there's not noice, as ISO is just 200, I guess is the picture compressing effect , it was a bit a challange get a right focus in the gloomy and wet summer night

Probably I have that feeling of noise because on to much contrast ? Especially on dark sides.
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[Yohanna_D]

the light falling on the flower against the darker background is really nice!! well done!!!
the only thing I would change - maybe less elements near the flower so that the eye can only contemplate this soft and delicate flower!

 

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

Hi nataliaflejszar&Photo , while there is good composition, the photo is really blur, a lot of noise presented which I believe is due of lack of lighting. You probably also could get a bit closer to the subject to ensure that there are mode details, as when I zoom in, I can see blur spots as well.

Apart from that, seems to be ok photo

thank you Jack, there's not noice, as ISO is just 200, I guess is the picture compressing effect , it was a bit a challange get a right focus in the gloomy and wet summer night

Some noise is not a problem and can come depending of many things

 

[MinitecaPhotographie]

I like the lighting, just as soft as needed. I would have placed the flower on the left third's line to enhance it a bit more.