Your opinion? I need you halp and you opinion, which one you like more? any critique is too welcome

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

I really need your help .
I've done three diffrent editings of the one photo
You can help me so much, when you say me. which one you like ,and will be wonderful, when you say why

Here are the pictures:

The first photo:
It's original shoot, only exported form RAW to JPG in LIGHTROOM CLASSI CC



The secound picture is edited in LRclassiCC like it:

And the third too in LRclassic cc like it:


I can say more in detail, how I edited the pictures, when someone would like to know

But get your opinion which one and why, pleace
And of couse what do you think about the shoot

 

[Jack]

Hey nataliaflejszar&Photo , I really like the second one. In middle is bright and sides are dark .

The 3 one, is a bit to much exposure, but that’s my opinion and point of view, first one is too dark

 

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

Hey nataliaflejszar&Photo , I really like the second one. In middle is bright and sides are dark .

The 3 one, is a bit to much exposure, but that’s my opinion and point of view, first one is too dark

Thank you so much for your opinion and point of view , it\s really helpful!

 

[Jack]

Thank you so much for your opinion and point of view , it\s really helpful!

You are welcome

 

[Shan]

Hi...please forgive me for being frank, but its my viewpoint and i am no expert. Please feel free to reject it.
I dont like any of the pictures as a composition because there is too many things going about. My eye does not rest in one place. Also not following the rule of thirds adds to the confusion for me. I am yet to find a focus point, but if the picture is deliberately oof, then it does not appeal to me.

I repeat, this is all a matter of personal opinion and hence please do not feel offended.

 

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

Hi...please forgive me for being frank, but its my viewpoint and i am no expert. Please feel free to reject it.
I dont like any of the pictures as a composition because there is too many things going about. My eye does not rest in one place. Also not following the rule of thirds adds to the confusion for me. I am yet to find a focus point, but if the picture is deliberately oof, then it does not appeal to me.

I repeat, this is all a matter of personal opinion and hence please do not feel offended.

Thank you for your opinon and some of critique
I love to break all photography rules,so as well, in my pictures is no rules