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[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

And one more from my new lens

 

[Greg]

I really love your new pictures nataliaflejszar&Photo ! Don't stop ^^

 

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

I really love your new pictures nataliaflejszar&Photo ! Don't stop ^^

merci Greg , it\s just beginning , not end the new lens, my big love that win with macro lens

 

[Helix_2648]

1Looks really good nataliaflejszar&Photo. Nice perspective

 

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

1Looks really good nataliaflejszar&Photo. Nice perspective

Danke shön Helix_2648 , I tried something quite different this time with my new lens

 

[Jack]

Good perspective as Helix_2648 said, unfortunately something is missing on the photo, probably lack of composition and more colours.

 

[Yohanna_D]

I don't know what to think about the photo:

• the subject is a bit too centered in my opinion and to my taste;
• the bokeh is nor too visible, nor too blurred; it's in between so a bit uncertain
• the light ... a bit too dark for me
• the point of view of this photo shoot... you can't see the center of the flower with some insects on it
• the stems are not entirely photographed - it's like you cut them

I am sorry about this review - not too charming I must admit, but it's also because I don't know what the story behind this photo should be, I don't understand your process of taking it - what you wanted to transmit through this photo.

 

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

THANKS guys for some of critique , it's just taken for fun ,and the vision '' resting under the flowers in evening'' just resting same . I think , the picture needs some of improvings by processing maybe.. ór make another one better

 

[Helix_2648]

Maybe a story behind would help. To understand that you're lying on the grass, watching the sky and the flower from below and that you wanted to share this moment with us nataliaflejszar&Photo. I don't think that anyone would blame you for this fair and constructive criticism Yohanna_D as you've precisely described the point which doesn't match from your point of view.

 

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

Maybe a story behind would help. To understand that you're lying on the grass, watching the sky and the flower from below and that you wanted to share this moment with us nataliaflejszar&Photo. I don't think that anyone would blame you for this fair and constructive criticism Yohanna_D as you've precisely described the point which doesn't match from your point of view.

so true Helix_2648 I always forget the rule of good decription of my pictures