Want critique Lunchtime

[Bart the belgian]

 

[Deleted member 250]

A bright, sharp image with a nice background and nice composition, maybe a little noisy in the out of focus areas but that may be because of the Jpg compression.
Exif details would be good

 

[Bart the belgian]

Thank you, I had to crop and there was à little bit of wind.

 

[Deleted member 250]

Thank you, I had to crop and there was à little bit of wind.

Nothing wrong with a good crop.

 

[Shan]

nice play on the theme color of yellow. however i am bothered that i cant see the compound eyes. is it a long crop? also would you kindly share the exif to the picture please? would be helpful for people like us to learn.

 

[Bart the belgian]

Tiff of this pic: iso:800 f/14 for 1/60 of a second

 

[Developers]

Yellow flower is to bright Bart the belgian , If you added exposure in LR, then you added up to much. try to decrease the shadow

 

[Bart the belgian]

Hello vasili, so you are saying that I have to decrease thé exposure on the yellow with thé "brush"? I use luminar but it's Almost thé Same as LR. Thank you for your feedback

 

[Jack]

Hello vasili, so you are saying that I have to decrease thé exposure on the yellow with thé "brush"? I use luminar but it's Almost thé Same as LR. Thank you for your feedback

I do use Luminar too, but I use it only for portraits pictures, also I would recommend you to retouch the pictures first in LR and the Luminar, as in Luminar, you just apply preset.