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Nikon D5200
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Flash used 1/8

Jack

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Hello Bihari Bihari , thanks for sharing it . That’s great image with great colours , however the bottom legs are a bit out of focus . Also , did you edited image with an photoshop action ? As in my opinion is to much saturation.
 

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Hello Bihari Bihari , thanks for sharing it . That’s great image with great colours , however the bottom legs are a bit out of focus . Also , did you edited image with an photoshop action ? As in my opinion is to much saturation.
Thank you I will try to work on my focusing skills :)
Yes it is an older pictures of mine but back then I just start to learn how to use the flash and on this picture I killed some of the color and I try to bring it back whit an editor.
 
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Jack

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Thank you I will try to work on my focusing skills :)
Yes it is an older pictures of mine but back then I just start to learn how to use the flash and on this picture I killed some of the color and I try to bring it back whit an editor.

You are welcome Bihari Bihari . In macro photography flash does play a very important role. what editor are you using ?

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You are welcome Bihari Bihari . In macro photography flash does play a very important role. what editor are you using ?

Quick note, when uploading images in forum, you can use small image icon, which will upload the picture directly on our server.
Lightroom on my phone 😅 (I know it is my bad.)
 
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Very nice composition Bihari Bihari ! 🙂
How long time have you been shooting macros? Do you like just macros or anothers kind of Photography too?
I started at January when I bought the Oshiro macro lens 😁 occasionally I use my 18-140mm for trips or walk around. Around a month ago I was lucky enough to buy 2 vintage lens for £10 (Helios 44M and a Hoya HMC 135mm) so I started shooting portraits of my wife and some Bokeh hunting some times ☺
 

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Lightroom on my phone 😅 (I know it is my bad.)
The picture is not bad Bihari Bihari. Maybe some smaller improvements here and there but all in all it's a great picture. So first of all I would try to reduce a bit the saturataion a bit. The rest is just learning by doing
 
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I started at January when I bought the Oshiro macro lens 😁 occasionally I use my 18-140mm for trips or walk around. Around a month ago I was lucky enough to buy 2 vintage lens for £10 (Helios 44M and a Hoya HMC 135mm) so I started shooting portraits of my wife and some Bokeh hunting some times ☺

Sounds great Bihari Bihari ;) , here on the forum is one more Helios lens fun panos_adgr panos_adgr ;)
I like to shoot almost everything :D. portrais are great if find good models ;)
 

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Lightroom on my phone 😅 (I know it is my bad.)

I would recommend to use a proper software for retouching images, on your phone you won’t be able to access all functions and features, and you are limited .