Your opinion? Very small insect on the flower

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

26.5.2020.9.07pm.
ISO1600. f6.1.1.320s. Olympus omd em10markIII. Olympus 60mm , + 2 ring tubs mm lite, 10+14mm , + ring macro led lump flash
How you like the composition ?

 

[Deleted member 250]

Sorry nataliaflejszar&Photo but for me this does not work.
Good colours but no real focal point for my eye to settle on and nothing is in focus

 

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

Thanks @Bill Edwards for your opinion.. , I tried to create something diffrend with creative focus on the insect.., maybe I need to try to crop a little. .to bet better effect..

 

[Shan]

what is the subject here, please?