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And here is the next one
abstack effect of dendalion and water drop, on black background
flash out of camera

itself i like the picture.. . I would like to still to see what reactions bring from you ;p Do you understand my abstract idea.. and what you could sugget to improving it?

 

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The picture still waiting for any comment

 

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For abstract ideas, better ask panos_adgr , he seems to be more professional on this field. From my point of view nataliaflejszar&Photo there is still some improvements which can be done. Try to make it sharper.

 

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nataliaflejszar&Photo Good photo, i see some blur, was this shot outside? Perhaps wind or camera shake?, also your DOF maybe too shallow, maybe try higher fstop and stronger flash

 

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thanks Jack , yes i know panos_adgr is master of art and abstracts photography .
Thanks for you comment and I know, there is, it's because i asking about your opinions that help me with the picture . My eye enjoy it, but when i think about photo competitions, i want to know about anothers photographers opinions

and Chavezshutter , yes it is taken outside in the park, and kept in my left hand the small dandelion, and in the right my camera , thanks for your opinions and advaices

 

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I never tried dandelion pictures, it looks fun with water drop

 

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A good reflection in the water drop would give the picture a special kick but actually it doesn't work for me. Or maybe I don't understand your indentation. Hopefully you are not disappointed nataliaflejszar&Photo

 

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Helix_2648 said:

A good reflection in the water drop would give the picture a special kick but actually it doesn't work for me. Or maybe I don't understand your indentation. Hopefully you are not disappointed nataliaflejszar&Photo

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Thanks for your opinion Helix_2648
Is still something in the picture, that still keeps me with

 

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nataliaflejszar&Photo said:

Thanks for your opinion Helix_2648
Is still something in the picture, that still keeps me with

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That's the most important nataliaflejszar&Photo ! We cannot understand all the time the intention of the other. The most important is that YOU like it and that you've fun during the shooting and processing.

 

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In addition to my comment, I would like to add that if you could achieve the dew drop more in focus and much sharp , than probably the photo will look better in my opinion.

 

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