Want critique Chrysoperla carnea

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• Jun 21, 2020

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I'm not convinced by the photo and the treatment, I can't think anymore, I need your advice.

 

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Hi @Christophe Berche
I like the transition in the background and the exposure to me looks fine..
Perhaps a little too crisp and saturated

 

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Christophe Berche said:

I'm not convinced by the photo and the treatment, I can't think anymore, I need your advice.



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the insect is so beautiful . it's just enough for me at the moment .. busy..

 

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Bill Edwards said:

Hi @Christophe Berche
I like the transition in the background and the exposure to me looks fine..
Perhaps a little too crisp and saturated

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It's quite possible @Bill Edwards , I don't like the body and the head of the insect, I think I'll put it at the next challenge, I'll take the retouch later, I was too hard on it.

 

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@Bill Edwards This version ?

 

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For me, it works better @Christophe Berche Although I prefer the background of the original as I think it complements the subject.

 

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• Jun 21, 2020

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and @Christophe Berche , how it's looking like in RAW? how lot of editing have you done on the picture , let's have a look on

 

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Bill Edwards said:

For me, it works better @Christophe Berche Although I prefer the background of the original as I think it complements the subject.

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I'll put this picture in the next challenge, it's not easy to retouch.

 

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Christophe Berche said:

I'll put this picture in the next challenge, it's not easy to retouch.

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why not? , where is a problem @Christophe Berche ?

 

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Good idea @Christophe Berche It will be a great challenge to get the balance right.

 

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