Great shot Bart the belgian , but as you asked for criticism, I will leave my opinion here
I like details and colours, however, seems that on eye is over exposed and an other other is under exposed. Probably you could increase the shadow , decrease highlight and not have much exposure.
If you want you can post the image here, and we will try to fix it
I posted already my comments in your new post in the photo clinic. Let us know if you've uploaded the RAW file to check the options how to improve this picture.