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isulanu

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since we are in criticism,I try to criticize :) I would say that a single branch would have been enough, the 2 behind weigh down and hinder reading(a cut of the chisel before:)) .Suddenly, the field being free behind, you could have closed even more to get a nice star on the drop .... I find it much nicer (but hey, it's a personal opinion).
That said, The focus is good, lhe colors and light, also, and your picture is good(y)
 
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Bihari

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since we are in criticism,I try to criticize :) I would say that a single branch would have been enough, the 2 behind weigh down and hinder reading(a cut of the chisel before:)) .Suddenly, the field being free behind, you could have closed even more to get a nice star on the drop .... I find it much nicer (but hey, it's a personal opinion).
That said, The focus is good, lhe colors and light, also, and your picture is good(y)

You mean something like this?
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The only problem with butcher everything around is my Wife would kill me for it xD
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Jack

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Great details Bihari Bihari . But Iā€™ve noticed some spots on your photo, probably this could be from your lens or camera, check inside if there arenā€™t any dust . I have same issue, still need to check.

Apart from that, looks good ;)
 
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Bihari

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Great details Bihari Bihari . But Iā€™ve noticed some spots on your photo, probably this could be from your lens or camera, check inside if there arenā€™t any dust . I have same issue, still need to check.

Apart from that, looks good ;)
Thank you.
Yes I know the three little dots . Unfortunately I have some dust on the sensor ..... But hopefully tomorrow my cleaning kit will arrive and I can solve the issue šŸ˜…
 
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Greg

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I hope for you ! My reflex has the same probleme and i don't have special liquid for my sticks
 
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Helix_2648

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I like the second one more than the first because it has to much vibrance. The green background is too strong and looks a bit unnatural Bihari Bihari. The drops looks like pearls and the reflections in it are really fantastic.
 
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