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Canon 450d sigma 105mm Ex macro DG, F/16 1-160

nataliaflejszar&Photo

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Hope everyone is well, just thought I’d share View attachment 5862View attachment 5863

Hi Dan_roberts_photography . Nice to see more your pictures, and something quite diffrend I've seen and aristic, stand out macro pictures

About my suggestion, try to keep focus on bee an eye , if possible , I know , they are too fast , but effect is always great
and in both pictures maybe a bit too much higlights, reducion a bit would be fine, and the pictures will be more enjoyable for an eye (my eye ), but of course everything depeens of photographer's -as an artist interpretations and point of view , and I try to apraciate it

but hope to get anothers members comments, who have better eye on details, for example our masters Helix_2648 , MinitecaPhotographie
 
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Hi thank you for your comments, greatly appreciated, the imagine must be slightly compressed or something when I uploaded because they are clear on other sites. Will definitely take your note on the highlights and tone them down a little thank you again
 

nataliaflejszar&Photo

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Yout are very welcome Dan_roberts_photography , waiting for more your pictures
How big are the pictures? -size in Mb, Kb..?
 

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Hello Dan_roberts_photography
I cannot agree more with what Natalia just said.
But pure macro 1:1 is not that easy to do so congratulations for these close-ups.
best regards,
Yohanna
 

nataliaflejszar&Photo

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Hello Dan_roberts_photography
I cannot agree more with what Natalia just said.
But pure macro 1:1 is not that easy to do so congratulations for these close-ups.
best regards,
Yohanna

Macro photography isn't easy, but maybe in this hardness is so lot of good sides, becouse as MinitecaPhotographie said one day.\\ withought hardness is not glory\\, so we are here together to suppport each others in this way, to imprive our skills, and become betters, find own styl, learn new techniques or just enjoy own artistic styl.. ,
People on thye webside are really wonderful and very friendly, althought very international team, but it\s best in it all

Hope you Dan_roberts_photography and Yohanna_D will enjoy to stay active with us , althought everyone is busy in private life, but why do not find time for hobby too
 

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I have taken pictures quiet often from bees and bumble bees and know that it's sometimes a patience game. There is one little comment from my side. The flash seems to be too strong. But apart from that it's a very good macro.
 
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