Want critique Flower with bokeh background, shooted at home

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Helix_2648

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Hi nataliaflejszar&Photo nataliaflejszar&Photo. The idea is very good and you respect the 1/3 rule, but I would increase the exposure a little bit. Further more I think it would be better (in this case) to have a higher DOF so that the flower s completly sharp in front of the blurry background wth your nice christmas bokeh.

And I would remove the small green part of your flower at the bottom of your picture.
 

nataliaflejszar&Photo

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Hi nataliaflejszar&Photo nataliaflejszar&Photo. The idea is very good and you respect the 1/3 rule, but I would increase the exposure a little bit. Further more I think it would be better (in this case) to have a higher DOF so that the flower s completly sharp in front of the blurry background wth your nice christmas bokeh.

And I would remove the small green part of your flower at the bottom of your picture.

Thanks Helix_2648 Helix_2648 for your good suggestions :)
 

nataliaflejszar&Photo

Welcome to the beautiful North of Europe :)
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I hope to see the next picture ^^

Yeah you will Greg Greg78340 ;), I shared some of landscapes too in last time because I've been shooted them a lot of in las time :D, you find on the forum ;), and lot of diffrent beffore shared pictures too.. you find them a lot... here in the forum ;) :ROFLMAO: , don't foget to visit on the Olympus subforum too ;) :D
 
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