Want critique Flower with bokeh background, shooted at home

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nataliaflejszar&Photo

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1/50s f5.60 ISO1250, flash out camera
Hi! Here my oldest picture of flawer , from last winter experiments at home. In background christmas decoration.
What do you like it? I want to critique and opinions
 
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Helix_2648

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Hi nataliaflejszar&Photo. The idea is very good and you respect the 1/3 rule, but I would increase the exposure a little bit. Further more I think it would be better (in this case) to have a higher DOF so that the flower s completly sharp in front of the blurry background wth your nice christmas bokeh.

And I would remove the small green part of your flower at the bottom of your picture.
 
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nataliaflejszar&Photo

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Thanks Helix_2648 for your good suggestions
 
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nataliaflejszar&Photo

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Greg78340 said:
I hope to see the next picture ^^
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Yeah you will Greg78340 , I shared some of landscapes too in last time because I've been shooted them a lot of in las time , you find on the forum , and lot of diffrent beffore shared pictures too.. you find them a lot... here in the forum , don't foget to visit on the Olympus subforum too
 
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