Want critique Fly in rainy day.. Ö_Ö

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

sucessfully merged.. after organaizing my computer- I've been have some of problems with, but I think I just need to buy biggest Sdd hard disck .
the picture taken week ago.., already edited fastly.. , just basic adjustments.. How do you like and what do you suggest to improve?

 

[Helix_2648]

Hi nataliaflejszar&Photo. The fly looks a bit blurry. Was it windy outside as you've taken the stack?



The composition itself is very good and I really like the background with its colours. The dew drops on the fly are also great and gives the picture a special look.

Have you checked if the setting for the focus shift is correct? I know from my camera, that I can set the subtlety from 1 to 10. Means in which steps the camera moves the focus forward. You will get blurry areas if the setting is too rough.

The closer the lens comes to the subject and the smaller the aperture the smaller the focus shift should be.

 

[Jack]

Highly agree with Helix_2648 , also there is lot of noise . probably because of high ISO, I mean 800, is not that much, but for some reason there are present noise in the picture.

 

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

Hi nataliaflejszar&Photo. The fly looks a bit blurry. Was it windy outside as you've taken the stack?

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The composition itself is very good and I really like the background with its colours. The dew drops on the fly are also great and gives the picture a special look.

Have you checked if the setting for the focus shift is correct? I know from my camera, that I can set the subtlety from 1 to 10. Means in which steps the camera moves the focus forward. You will get blurry areas if the setting is too rough.

The closer the lens comes to the subject and the smaller the aperture the smaller the focus shift should be.

Danke shön Helix_2648 for very useful comment,
Yeah , that they was rainy and windy, and I kept camera in one hand and umbrellas in another so although this quite glad for the result
Interesting.. I need to look on my settings...

 

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

Highly agree with Helix_2648 , also there is lot of noise . probably because of high ISO, I mean 800, is not that much, but for some reason there are present noise in the picture.

Thanks Jack , I think the noise isn't big problem on the picture
And what do you think guys about cropping? Still thinking about.. but l like the background too...

 

[Jack]

Thanks Jack , I think the noise isn't big problem on the picture
And what do you think guys about cropping? Still thinking about.. but l like the background too...

By cropping the Image you won’t solve the issue nataliaflejszar&Photo

 

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

Huh I need to post something new , it would be me last posted picture on the forum

 

[Jack]

Huh I need to post something new , it would be me last posted picture on the forum

Go for it nataliaflejszar&Photo

 

[Helix_2648]

I just want to mention that your skills becomes better and better nataliaflejszar&Photo. We all are not without failures. You know from my pictures that they not free of failures. Sometimes you find some stacking failures and sometimes a bit wrong framing. So don't be disappointed.

 

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

I just want to mention that your skills becomes better and better nataliaflejszar&Photo. We all are not without failures. You know from my pictures that they not free of failures. Sometimes you find some stacking failures and sometimes a bit wrong framing. So don't be disappointed.

Thank you so much Helix_2648 for your lovely words . Is hard to make perfect pictures . But we need to try best and became better Photographers