Want critique In mushroom's fantasyland

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

Hello

Here is my two pictures with palying in the forst.. with the small mushroom, autumn leaf and flash from my phone-Samsung J6 , and editing in Lightroom classic cc..

How do you like the effects?

More pictures soon..

 

[Greg]

Pretty good, i like the scene, but the mushroom need more clarity, light I think

 

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

Pretty good, i like the scene, but the mushroom need more clarity, light I think

Merci Greg . I know, it could be better

 

[Helix_2648]

Good composition but the flashlight looks really distracting. I would recommend to take a picture / stack with and without the light to edit it later on in PS.

 

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

Good composition but the flashlight looks really distracting. I would recommend to take a picture / stack with and without the light to edit it later on in PS.
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Danke Helix_2648
I can try do it in diffrend way , but itself quite glad with the result , maybe just softer light.. , need to think about , and biggest leaf as a background would be fine

 

[Jack]

Hello nataliaflejszar&Photo , I'm not pro shooting mushrooms , but what can I say here. They look a bit dark to me, I think because you had your flash behind the subject. I would say if you could have a flash on top of your camera, that could be improved as well.

 

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

Hello nataliaflejszar&Photo , I'm not pro shooting mushrooms , but what can I say here. They look a bit dark to me, I think because you had your flash behind the subject. I would say if you could have a flash on top of your camera, that could be improved as well.

Thanks Jack .
I used my phone flash for the lighting, and I wanted it as backlight effect,so because of it is on the back of the subject . it was just as experiment for fun, to get something dreamy and fantasy
but yes .. next time i try to do it better , some of new ideas has been already . and yesterday I shooted again some of mushrooms and with my small toy..
i'll share it later

 

[Jack]

Looking forward for seeing your new images nataliaflejszar&Photo