Want critique Mothers Day in france

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Helix_2648

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I would suggest two improvements. I would play a little bit with the exposure or the highlights and I would use dodge & burn to get a better structure. I made a tutorial for this where you can see how it works. With that you can darken the shadows (or brighten the highlights) which has a great effect on flowers with their petals.

Here's an example for you where I've used this:

 
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you've worked hard with the texture and the rendering of the petals, in harmony with the softness of the colours.
 

nataliaflejszar&Photo

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That's just great effect Helix_2648 ,I need to try it too one day
Did you created the background itself too ? Looks so interesting and beautiful, work well with the flower
 
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