Want critique The Birth of a flower

[Bart the belgian]

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[Jack]

Hi Bart the belgian , In my view the top of the image is too bright, and at the bottom of the image a bit blur. I'm pretty sure MinitecaPhotographie or rcorteschile will give you a better critiques. Apart from that isn't bad.

By the way. have you cropped the image ?

 

[Bart the belgian]

Hi Bart the belgian , In my view the top of the image is too bright, and at the bottom of the image a bit blur. I'm pretty sure MinitecaPhotographie or rcorteschile will give you a better critiques. Apart from that isn't bad.

By the way. have you cropped the image ?

Hello, the picture is not cropped. I just changed the dimensions off the picture to square. The blur at the bottom, isn't that related to the Boketh?

 

[Jack]

Hello, the picture is not cropped. I just changed the dimensions off the picture to square. The blur at the bottom, isn't that related to the Boketh?

It is related to bokeh, but in my view you can have the subject more in focus. So far here is only the sharpness part in the image.



That's only my opinion

 

[Bart the belgian]

It is related to bokeh, but in my view you can have the subject more in focus. So far here is only the sharpness part in the image.

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That's only my opinion

I appreciatie your opinion. Otherwise I don't ask it. I'm à Strong little belgian

 

[Jack]

I appreciatie your opinion. Otherwise I don't ask it. I'm à Strong little belgian

No problem Bart the belgian , I'm learning too , so fully understandable

 

[MinitecaPhotographie]

The main thing that disturb me in this photo is color saturation that, according to me, is a bit too much. Flowers are, whatever they seems, not ever the most evident subject in photography. Every time I shoot a flower a try differents angles to found the better one. For this one I would have tried to place me on the top of the flower or a bit lower than you've done. But as already said it's just how I would do.

 

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

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For me nice picture, nothing more or less . My eyes just like it as it already

 

[Helix_2648]

The main thing that disturb me in this photo is color saturation that, according to me, is a bit too much. Flowers are, whatever they seems, not ever the most evident subject in photography. Every time I shoot a flower a try differents angles to found the better one. For this one I would have tried to place me on the top of the flower or a bit lower than you've done. But as already said it's just how I would do.

I agree to MinitecaPhotographie, the strong color saturation was first what I've noticed. It's nevertheless a great picture but can be improved.