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Bart the belgian

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Hi Bart the belgian , have you tried to focus on water here?
Are you always cropping your images?
Hi Jack, no I don't always crop de pictures. I like this type and this one isrealy not beautiful when it's the normal Size. In réal it was à beautiful composition. Yes the raindrop was thé subject.
 
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Hi Jack, no I don't always crop de pictures. I like this type and this one isrealy not beautiful when it's the normal Size. In réal it was à beautiful composition. Yes the raindrop was thé subject.

Alright, personally I try not to crop images unless there are something in the frame which I don’t want.

Do you like dark images? because the photo is not having enough exposure
 

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Alright, personally I try not to crop images unless there are something in the frame which I don’t want.

Do you like dark images? because the photo is not having enough exposure
Yes indeed. It's strange because I used thé flash. When I brighten up thé picture it seems that I don't find thé right balance between thé upper side and below.
 
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Yes indeed. It's strange because I used thé flash. When I brighten up thé picture it seems that I don't find thé right balance between thé upper side and below.

To be honest, doesn't really look like there has been used flash, your flash is TTL?
 

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To be honest, doesn't really look like there has been used flash, your flash is TTL?
Indeed, that's the problem. It looks like the flash didn't react. I have a godox v860 ii. So normally it's à good flash. The battery wasn't empty and I tried it with à button on the flash and it reacted.
 
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Indeed, that's the problem. It looks like the flash didn't react. I have a godox v860 ii. So normally it's à good flash. The battery wasn't empty and I tried it with à button on the flash and it reacted.

The manual settings on my flash really confuses me, so I always rely on automatic settings, if I want to make some adjustments, I do it via camera settings to the flash.
 
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The manual settings on my flash really confuses me, so I always rely on automatic settings, if I want to make some adjustments, I do it via camera settings to the flash.
Ok, Thank you, till know I did it manual but it doesn't always work
 
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