Want critique Trapped in a spiral

[Helix_2648]

You've really a good eye for such details Bart the belgian but I agree to Jack that the exposure is too dark. Maybe you can increase it and use a faded mask in PS to balance the brightness of the upper and lower part of the picture?

 

[isulanu]

i love the idea....i see a "problem" with the light...not so dark; not so clear...i think "entre les deux mon coeur balance " , and you must choice...and second point, the next time, make appear your face in the drop

 

[Chavezshutter]

Hello Bart!

I like what your trying to do with this photo, It's very similar to refraction style which I'm very fond of.

I have a question...Before you took the photo was there an image inside the drop or was it just a normal, shiny drop?

In both cases your flash might the issue. Let me know if you want to hear more.