Want critique Wild orchidee

[Bart the belgian]

 

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

Hi Bart the belgian ,
nice pictures but:

• the focus is in wrong place, I would like to see it in central of the flower, not on the petal there on the left above only, or do by focus stracking whole flower \\ feel the frames\\ effect
• composition not the best, maybe on the right petal if would be whole , will be fine, when on petal on the the left - above is too- or cropping in this moment

/ the light is to high - you can improve it by editing, and the shades on the picture need to be improving to do them more friendly for an eye..

It\s only my noticed and opinons

 

[Bart the belgian]

Hi Bart the belgian ,
nice pictures but:

• the focus is in wrong place, I would like to see it in central of the flower, not on the petal there on the left above only, or do by focus stracking whole flower \\ feel the frames\\ effect
• composition not the best, maybe on the right petal if would be whole , will be fine, when on petal on the the left - above is too- or cropping in this moment

/ the light is to high - you can improve it by editing, and the shades on the picture need to be improving to do them more friendly for an eye..

It\s only my noticed and opinons

This is great feedback. Thank you.

 

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

This is great feedback. Thank you.

you are welcome Bart the belgian

 

[Bart the belgian]

This is great feedback. Thank you.

Hi Bart the belgian ,
nice pictures but:

• the focus is in wrong place, I would like to see it in central of the flower, not on the petal there on the left above only, or do by focus stracking whole flower \\ feel the frames\\ effect
• composition not the best, maybe on the right petal if would be whole , will be fine, when on petal on the the left - above is too- or cropping in this moment

/ the light is to high - you can improve it by editing, and the shades on the picture need to be improving to do them more friendly for an eye..

It\s only my noticed and opinons

Hello, does this picture has a better approche ? Same flower, same Light, single shot

 

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

Hello, does this picture has a better approche ? Same flower, same Light, single shotView attachment 4613

Salut Bart the belgian !
Much better Bart the belgian !
If you can still remove this green part of the flower from the left side, by paint it on the black by brash using in Lightroom or Photoshop, you can do it easy, the picture after them will be perfect

 

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

All background do only black
There I see much more to do as I thought, but I hope you understand Bart the belgian what I mean! Not much to do yet for me
Maybe someone else can have more ideas . For my eye the simple black background will be working well with the flower, when you took so great improving . So I want to see the picture again with simple flower and the simple black background
Thanks for sharing the picture

 

[Bart the belgian]

All background do only black
There I see much more to do as I thought, but I hope you understand Bart the belgian what I mean! Not much to do yet for me
Maybe someone else can have more ideas . For my eye the simple black background will be working well with the flower, when you took so great improving . So I want to see the picture again with simple flower and the simple black background
Thanks for sharing the picture

I think I understand. Thank you for your reply. Have à Nice weekend

 

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

I think I understand. Thank you for your reply. Have à Nice weekend

You are welcome Bart the belgian

 

[Helix_2648]

All background do only black
There I see much more to do as I thought, but I hope you understand Bart the belgian what I mean! Not much to do yet for me
Maybe someone else can have more ideas . For my eye the simple black background will be working well with the flower, when you took so great improving . So I want to see the picture again with simple flower and the simple black background
Thanks for sharing the picture

Hey nataliaflejszar&Photo...couldn't give better tips! You've absolutely pointed it out.

Bart the belgian with this tips you can improve your quality a lot! But the picture itself is not bad, but can be improved.