Want critique So here's my favorite spider pic.

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So this one was just jumping around on the marble floor. Feed me back

 

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Not bad photo Mudart . But in my opinion, I would say the photo is a bit to bright. Apart from that’s, the spiders look ok. I know one member here who might give you a better advice or opinion on spiders MinitecaPhotographie .

 

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Hello Mudart. You've found a nice male Euophrys frontalis. Regarding your photo I agree with Jack it's a bit to bright according to me. Composition is quite good but if I could give you an advice, I would have placed master eyes on the upper third line. Still a nice shot for sure. Well done.

 

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MinitecaPhotographie said:

Hello Mudart. You've found a nice male Euophrys frontalis. Regarding your photo I agree with Jack it's a bit to bright according to me. Composition is quite good but if I could give you an advice, I would have placed master eyes on the upper third line. Still a nice shot for sure. Well done.

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Thank you so much for your response MinitecaPhotographie is there a place I could get to see your work sir?

 

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Mudart said:

Thank you so much for your response MinitecaPhotographie is there a place I could get to see your work sir?

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Woah, I'm inspired after looking at your pictures sir MinitecaPhotographie

 

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Thanks a lot.

 

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it is a bit bright like Jack said but it does not bother me that much; the sharpness is on point; wonderful job!

 

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MinitecaPhotographie is our first choice for perfect jumping spider pictures! Yours looks also very good but as mentioned above a bit too bright. Apart from that it's really good with a very good focus!

 

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Very beautiful!
I like the minimalistic approach and the framing works nice! I like the bright background and although it is bright it is not washed out. It has preserved its colour tones and to my eyes it works great with the subject creating an antithesis with it which emphasises it. It lock your eyes on the eyes of the spider.

 

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