Want critique Spider on web, BW

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

Hunting spider on the web,- black and white, single shot, althought from the focus brackeeting sarja
How do you like the picture ?

 

[Greg]

Hi ! how are you today ? The composition is good, but too much blur ^^ nedd clarity on the spider

 

[MinitecaPhotographie]

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Hunting spider on the web,- black and white, single shot, althought from the focus brackeeting sarja
How do you like the picture ?

It looks like the spider is out of focus. The B&W treatment works great on this coposition.

 

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

Hi ! how are you today ? The composition is good, but too much blur ^^ nedd clarity on the spider

merce Greg78340 pour ton commentaire .
In colour the photo will be nothing , but in the BW .., for me is just it.. ,the blurring works nice too in this version.. but I want to still some of critique and comments , how it working in your eyes

 

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

It looks like the spider is out of focus. The B&W treatment works great on this coposition.

merce MinitecaPhotographie , the spider is quite a lot out of focus, but the web is in focus, and I like it, because of it I tried to fix the picture in BW version .

 

[Jack]

It is much blur here nataliaflejszar&Photo , I guess because you was trying to get this image with non macro lens ?

 

[Helix_2648]

Hi nataliaflejszar&Photo, good idea to test B&W for this picture, but to be honest the spider is blurry and our of focus and (for me) there's too much noise in the picture. I limit my pictures to max. ISO 400.

 

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

It is much blur here nataliaflejszar&Photo , I guess because you was trying to get this image with non macro lens ?

I used macro lens Olympus 60mm Jack , but I tied same focus stracking - hand handing, and was a bit windy this time, and I tried too get the web too on the picture.. , almost ! , From the sarja just one picture is quite ok..

 

[nataliaflejszar&Photo]

Hi nataliaflejszar&Photo, good idea to test B&W for this picture, but to be honest the spider is blurry and our of focus and (for me) there's too much noise in the picture. I limit my pictures to max. ISO 400.

Danke shön Helix_2648 , to slow shutter speed , only 3s , always is good to try BW, especially before we decide to remove the picture.. . I like the light on the spider and the web.. , but yes, is a bit blurring and noice, but I think is not a big problem in BW

 

[Jack]

I used macro lens Olympus 60mm Jack , but I tied same focus stracking - hand handing, and was a bit windy this time, and I tried too get the web too on the picture.. , almost ! , From the sarja just one picture is quite ok..

Alright, hope you will have more luck next time