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we can also try this to highlight the flies, we lighten with a gradient circle and desaturate a little the green and yellow colors.

 

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You're pushing me to the edge, I'm running out of ideas.

 

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lets remove the subject from the background..and then think

 

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lets remove the subject from the background..and then think

 

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by putting the flies on the front and put a background less colorful, more bland, it "disappears".

 

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exactly..i tried to go that way...but didnt work out.

 

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now take your first picture and compare it with the treatment we did, it's an exercise I often do to see if I'm going in the right direction

Thank you Shan I had a great time on your post,
The exchange is the only way to wait for an objective.

 

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exactly..i tried to go that way...but didnt work out.

Christophe Berche said:

now take your first picture and compare it with the treatment we did, it's an exercise I often do to see if I'm going in the right direction

Thank you Shan I had a great time on your post,
The exchange is the only way to wait for an objective.

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that is why i keep on coming to this community...to improve my image by exposing them to different viewpoint. I want this community to be focused on only that! Thank you for the nudge, and all the help!

 

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These two held position for quite some time. There was also a little fly excreta at 5 o clock position!
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great shoot Shan , but maybe the deep negative space is unnecessary on the picture, when my eyes jump on the flies to see them and beautiful details on them , maybe cropping will be fine?

 

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nataliaflejszar&Photo said:

great shoot Shan , but maybe the deep negative space is unnecessary on the picture, when my eyes jump on the flies to see them and beautiful details on them , maybe cropping will be fine?

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the jpeg is up there, i have shared the raw too in this thread. can you please do it and show me your interpretation?

 

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